One of my first tests with regards to the top ten brief, a quick 5 second ident that could hopefully work quite fluently with a bit of refining.
However, there are a number of elements that need improving straight away;
∆ The name needs to be more informed
∆ The quality of the pong animation is slightly too blurred
∆ There is a horrible black line down the left hand side which I didnt notice untill importing it to VImeo
∆ The two pong cursors are left in random places at the end (could merge to form and underline?)
On the whole I'm pleased with the concept and the effect it has, the next step is to encorporate sound, the relevant pong sounds, also the bleep sound when a gmae starts or ends. Hopefully attaining such sounds shouldn't be difficult, I'll be back shortly with a post of my findings.
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